The second character in my book that I'd like y'all to meet is:
Jilleen ("Jill") Williams
Excerpt from Chapter 5~
Jill, who hadn’t said a word yet, could hardly contain herself now. She quickly clamped a hand over her mouth and turned her head away in an attempt to keep from giggling, but her shoulders shook in suppressed laughter.
David
noticed Jill’s struggle and grinned, cocking his head slightly. “Gonna make
it?” he asked. A look of amusement spreading across his face.
Jill
forced herself to look at him. “Sorry.” She said, trying so hard not to laugh.
“Don’t
apologize to me!” he paused. “Or were you laughing at me?”
Jill
didn’t answer but just shrugged her shoulders and smiled, despite the fact that
she knew she was blushing.
Jill will become more of a main character in the second book. I have not titled it yet, but God really helped me bring the outline for it together in the last week or so, and I'm excited to see how it will turn out! Look for more info about it in the near future!
Hey Keri! I read all of the posts you've done so far and really enjoyed them! I enjoy writing and when I was thirteen ( I am now 15) a friend and I decided we wanted to write books just for fun. We would write a little each week and read each others as we went along... Due to a lack of time and motivation we've abandoned that project, though I still have the notebook. I really do enjoy writing though and have since then actually started another story based in the late 1800's about a rather tom-boyish girl who is about to become betrothed. I am thinking about pre-ordering your book! I hope you put more excerpts up! Okay, this comment is getting pretty long! -Rebekah
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Hi Rebekah!
DeleteThanks for your comment! I am planning to post more excerpts from the book in the future, so keep an eye out! :)
Keri
Carry on with your story writing. All the best.
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